Writer's Block: Long Nights, Short Poems

[violachic]

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Uh.

Not really, no. Should it?

Comments

[disappearinjon.livejournal.com]

See, you could have answered no as a haiku (or, actually, senryu, but whatever):

Not really, no. Should it?
Why should the year's shortest day
inspire poems?

[ironlemur.livejournal.com]

not to nitpick, but the first line was 6 syllables.

suggestions:

"Not really. Should it?"

or

"Not really, no. Should't?"

[disappearinjon.livejournal.com]

Ssh... I was using violachic's original words, so it's not quite perfect.

Anyway, the whole 5-7-5 thing is kind of nonsense...